

We have the possessive and pushy cop, Sam. "Yeah, I know." "You know?" "Whaddaya want?" "What do I want?" "What do you want to eat?" "Eat?" "Yes, eat." "I'm okay." "Okay?" Grrrrr.the repetitiveness aggravated me to no end.Ī few more issues to wrap up. Questions were answered with questions and it appeared over and over again. I finally pinpointed what aggravated me about the dialogue. He also refuses to enter the witness protection program. He walks out of a hospital after he's attacked and just starts walking in the freezing cold.


He treats his ex-lovers like shit and honestly he makes some extremely stupid decisions. Yes, he's good-looking and always wants to help people but he is not perfect. By the time the third person was entranced by him, I wanted to kill him. I felt like the author was jamming his beauty and how perfect he is down my throat. They all thought he could be a model and all you heard was "God, you are beautiful." *rolls eyes* The thing is, I could probably get into the character (a little) if everyone didn't fall head over heels for him. Nobody could keep their hands off of him. Colleagues, friends, ex/new lovers, anyone who's fortunate to lay their eyes on the halo of light that surrounds him, loves him. At least this is what EVERYONE thinks, apparently except for me. Jory is the most perfect person to walk the face of the Earth. The story is told from the first person narrative, by Jory. This was one of the most irritating and annoying books I've read in a long time and it's mainly because of the MC, Jory. Warning to all you Jory fans out there, this is going to be rough.
